Writing

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We are doing explanations about floods, tropical cyclones and heaps more An explanation is where you explain how something works e.g how we digest food and put it into steps.

I am doing mine on tropical cyclones it's really quite fun!!!!

POEMS

This is my poem about smoking, and letting go of the habit.

An Evil World No More

With a magnificent flash and an explosion of fire the match comes to life. A furious flame rises from its head but gentle smoke surrounds it, the two collide and intertwine, making a carbon dioxide guyfawkes show. A disgusting taste of carbon and tar drift down my throat once more. While I sit there breathing uncontrollably. when the evil spirit gives light I decide to obey because I have no choice, I have already sworn the oath of addiction. To have and to hold, for all of my life. Its the end for them as I take my last puff and then throw it to the ground “no more, no more,” I scream to the world I will no longer be in the palm of your hand I am no longer a smoker.

By Tahlia Griffis